EPP

Krzysztof Hetman

Amendment Analysis

22
Amendments total
69%
Reduce Privacy
-14
Score

15 worsen Data Privacy

6 are neutral for Data Privacy

1 improve Data Privacy

15
6
1

1 combine improved Data Privacy with simplification

15 decrease privacy and add complexity

15
6
1

3 push back against weakening the existing GDPR.

2 violate Charter of Fundamental Rights of the European Union

22 GDPR-relevant amendments by Krzysztof Hetman

#1059 Article 9 – paragraph 5 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 3 – point b)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 9 – paragraph 5

Text proposed by the Commission
5. For processing referred to in point (k) of paragraph 2, appropriate organisational and technical measures shall be implemented to avoid v the collection and otherwise processing of special categories of personal data. Where, despite the implementation of such measures, the controller identifies special categories of personal data in the datasets used for training, testing or validation or in the AI system or AI model, the controller shall remove such data. If removal of those data requires disproportionate effort, the controller shall in any event effectively protect without undue delay such data from being used to produce outputs, from being disclosed or otherwise made available to third parties.
Amendment
5. For processing referred to in point (k) of paragraph 2, appropriate organisational and technical measures shall be implemented to mitigate the risk of collection and otherwise processing of special categories of personal data. Where, despite the implementation of such measures, the controller is notified of special categories of personal data relating to specific data subjects in the aforementioned datasets used for training, testing or validation or in the AI system or AI model, the controller shall, taking into account its capabilities, implement appropriate technical and organisational measures to cease processing that special category data for the purpose of training or developing an AI system or AI model.
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noyb's comment:

The amendment is a mixed attempt to increase protection with stronger wording, but without actual enforcement options or specific technical measures. Generally accepts the COM proposal.

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#1205 Article 35 – paragraph 4 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 9 – point a)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 35 – paragraph 4

Text proposed by the Commission
4. The Board shall prepare and transmit to the Commission a proposal for a list of the kind of processing operations which are subject to the requirement for a data protection impact assessment pursuant to paragraph 1.
Amendment
4. The Board shall prepare and transmit to the Commission a proposal for a list of the kind of processing operations which are subject to the requirement for a data protection impact assessment pursuant to paragraph 1. In preparing its proposal, the Board shall take due account the lists of processing operations established and made public by supervisory authorities and shall ensure that its proposal reflects a consistent and proportionate approximation of the processing operations identified in those lists, taking into account the principle of legal certainty.
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noyb's comment:

No material changes to the Commission’s proposal.

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#1270 Article 41a – paragraph 2 – point a (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 10)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 41a – paragraph 2 – point a

Text proposed by the Commission
(a) assess the state of the art of available techniques;
Amendment
(a) assess the state of the art of available techniques such as privacy enhancing technologies;;
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noyb's comment:

Does not bring material change in regards to the Commission's proposal. The proposal stays overall as a decrease of protection for data subjects' fundamental rights. Such decisions are typcially reserved to SAs under Article 8(3) of the Charter.

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#1385 Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point aa (new) (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point aa (new)

Text proposed by the Commission
Amendment
(aa) In Article 88a, paragraph 3, the following point aa is inserted: '(aa) enabling contextual advertising to the user, and related purposes which support contextual advertising, which is not based on any type of profiling.'
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noyb's comment:

Further exception introduced.

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#1399 Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point d (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point d

Text proposed by the Commission
(d) maintaining or restoring the security of a service provided by the controller and requested by the data subject or the terminal equipment used for the provision of such service.
Amendment
(d) maintaining, restoring or ensuring the technical security of a service provided by the controller and requested by the data subject or the terminal equipment used for the provision of such service, including in particular cybersecurity, the protection of personal data and privacy of the user and prevention of fraud and unauthorised access provided that such measures do not override the fundamental rights and interests of the subscriber or user;
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noyb's comment:

Builds upon the new exception proposed by the Commission, which allows for a limitation on privacy. Yet, slightly pushing back on the Commission proposal.

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#1403 Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point da (new) (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point da (new)

Text proposed by the Commission
Amendment
(da) In Article 88a, paragraph 3, the following point da is added: '(da) contextual advertising and related limitation of advertisement display, audience measurement and preventing fraudulent misrepresentation of audience, unless at least one of the following applies: (i) the processing is likely to result in a risk to the rights and freedoms of natural persons; (ii) the processing involves profiling; (iii) personal data are stored at the time when the electronic communication service is not actively used; (iv) personal data are connected with past or future activity of the data subject.'
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noyb's comment:

New exception, many (partly undefined) details to consider as a controller. Lack of legal certainty.

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#1411 Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point db (new) (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88a – paragraph 3 – point db (new)

Text proposed by the Commission
Amendment
(db) In Article 88a, paragraph 3, the following point db is inserted: '(db) processing where the controller deploys recognised privacy-enhancing technologies (PETs) that effectively mitigate risks to the rights and freedoms of data subjects, in accordance with the technical specifications adopted pursuant to paragraph 4, 5 and 6;'
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noyb's comment:

New very broad exception introduced. Vague, given that PETs often amount to "privacy washing".

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#1413 Article 88a – paragraph 3– point dc (new) (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88a – paragraph 3– point dc (new)

Text proposed by the Commission
Amendment
(dc) In Article 88a, paragraph 3, the following point dc is added: '(dc) For the purpose of Article 88a paragraph (3)(e), the Commission shall: (i) assess the state of the art of available technologies; (ii) develop criteria to assess the effectiveness of risk mitigation in relation to the specific categories of data and processing operations.'
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noyb's comment:

Related to new exception, risk assessment oursourced to Commission, which may conflict with Article 8(3) of the Charter. Lack of legal certainty under the law (criteria developed outside of the law).

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#1443 Article 88b (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b

Text proposed by the Commission
Article 88b
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Undoes the positive Commission proposal.

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#1454 Article 88 b (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88 b

Text proposed by the Commission
Automated and machine-readable indications of data subject’s choices with respect to processing of personal data in the terminal equipment of natural persons
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Undoes the positive Commission proposal.

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#1460 Article 88b – paragraph 1 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 1

Text proposed by the Commission
(1) Controllers shall ensure that their online interfaces allow data subjects to: (a) Give consent through automated and machine-readable means, provided that the conditions for consent laid down in this Regulation are fulfilled; (b) decline a request for consent and exercise the right to object pursuant to Article 21(2) through automated and machine-readable means.
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Undoes the positive Commission proposal.

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#1466 Article 88b – paragraph 1 – point a (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 1 – point a

Text proposed by the Commission
(a) Give consent through automated and machine-readable means, provided that the conditions for consent laid down in this Regulation are fulfilled;
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Removes the main aim of automated signals.

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#1490 Article 88b – paragraph 2 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 2

Text proposed by the Commission
(2) Controllers shall respect the choices made by data subjects in accordance with paragraph 1.
Amendment
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noyb's comment:

Makes automated signals voluntary.

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#1501 Article 88b – paragraph 3 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 3

Text proposed by the Commission
(3) Paragraphs 1 and 2 shall not apply to controllers that are media service providers when providing a media service.
Amendment
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noyb's comment:

Broader application for automated signals, less interruptions for users, unique simpler experience for most interfaces. Exception is questionable from an equality before the law perspective.

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#1512 Article 88b – paragraph 4 – first subparagraph (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 4 – first subparagraph

Text proposed by the Commission
The Commission shall, in accordance with Article 10(1) of Regulation (EU) 1025/2012, request one or more European standardisation organisations to draft standards for the interpretation of machine-readable indications of data subjects’ choices.
Amendment
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noyb's comment:

Removes the standardisation element.

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#1520 Article 88b – paragraph 4 – second subparagraph (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 4 – second subparagraph

Text proposed by the Commission
Online interfaces of controllers which are in conformity with harmonised standards or parts thereof the references of which have been published in the Official Journal of the European Union shall be presumed to be in conformity with the requirements covered by those standards or parts thereof, set out in paragraph 1.
Amendment
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noyb's comment:

The law still remains mandatory, presumption is gone.

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#1528 Article 88b – paragraph 5 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 5

Text proposed by the Commission
(5) Paragraphs 1 and 2 shall apply from [OP: please insert the date = 24 months following the date of entry into force of this Regulation].
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Can be read as good for privacy (shortening the time for application) or as negative as a part of deleting the article, given that an implementation in 20 days [when the Article would apply] seems too ambitious.

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#1531 Article 88b – paragraph 6 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 6

Text proposed by the Commission
(6) Providers of web browsers, which are not SMEs, shall provide the technical means to allow data subjects to give their consent and to refuse a request for consent and exercise the right to object pursuant to Article 21(2) through the automated and machine-readable means referred to in paragraph 1 of this Article, as applied pursuant to paragraphs 2 to 5 of this Article.
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Limits the commission proposal.

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#1545 Article 88b – paragraph 7 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88b – paragraph 7

Text proposed by the Commission
(7) Paragraph 6 shall apply from [OP: please insert the date = 48 months following the date of entry into force of this Regulation].
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Can be read as good for privacy (shortening the time for application) or as negative as a part of deleting the article, given that an implementation in 20 days [when the Article would apply] seems too ambitious.

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#1564 Article 88c – paragraph 1 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88c – paragraph 1

Text proposed by the Commission
Where the processing of personal data is necessary for the interests of the controller in the context of the development and operation of an AI system as defined in Article 3, point (1), of Regulation (EU) 2024/1689 or an AI model, such processing may be pursued for legitimate interests within the meaning of Article 6(1)(f) of Regulation (EU) 2016/679, where appropriate, except where other Union or national laws explicitly require consent, and where such interests are overridden by the interests, or fundamental rights and freedoms of the data subject which require protection of personal data, in particular where the data subject is a child.
Amendment
Where the processing of personal data is necessary for the interests of the controller or a third party in the context of the development and operation of an AI system as defined in Article 3, point (1), of Regulation (EU) 2024/1689 or an AI model, including a general-purpose AI model as defined in Article 3, point (63) Regulation (EU) 2024/1689 such processing may be pursued for legitimate interests within the meaning of Article 6(1)(f) of Regulation (EU) 2016/679, except where other Union explicitly require consent, and where such interests are overridden by the interests, or fundamental rights and freedoms of the data subject which require protection of personal data, in particular where the data subject is a child.
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noyb's comment:

The amendment rephrases the Commission's proposal.

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#1584 Article 88c – paragraph 2 (Article 3 – paragraph 1 – point 15)


Regulation (EU) 2016/679
Article 88c – paragraph 2

Text proposed by the Commission
Any such processing shall be subject to appropriate organisational, technical measures and safeguards for the rights and freedoms of the data subject, such as to ensure respect of data minimisation during the stage of selection of sources and the training and testing of AI an system or AI model, to protect against non-disclosure of residually retained data in the AI system or AI model to ensure enhanced transparency to data subjects and providing data subjects with an unconditional right to object to the processing of their personal data.
Amendment
Any such processing shall be subject to appropriate organisational, technical measures and safeguards for the rights and freedoms of the data subject, such as to ensure respect of data minimisation during the stage of selection of sources and the training and testing of AI an system or AI model, to protect against non-disclosure of residually retained data in the AI system or AI model.
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noyb's comment:

The amendment removes the transparency elements from the Commission's proposal.

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#1716 Article 5 – paragraph 3 (Article 5 – paragraph 1 – point 2)


Directive 2002/58/EC
Article 5 – paragraph 3

Text proposed by the Commission
2. After Article 5(3), the following subparagraph is added: ‘This paragraph shall not apply if the subscriber or user is a natural person, and the information stored or accessed constitutes or leads to the processing of personal data.’
Amendment
deleted
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noyb's comment:

Back to the current version.

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